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So, I know I have been absent as of late. been working on a new Transformers Prime fanfiction story! Been exploring a whole element of writing which I've never tried before and the story is turning out to be my best work so far! My two beta readers, one a TF fanatic and the other, a budding author whom has written her own novel but doesn't know anything about Transformers, have been rating my chapters a solid 9/10. I mean...O...M...G!

...this means this artist/author is doing something right. =D 

... here's the prologue for anyone who is interested. It's more of a nightmare taking place but the profound meaning of it does fold out throughout the story. So um...yeah...tell me what you think of it so far....cause I'm currently sitting at 204 pages!
Here goes...


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~ TRANSFORMERS PRIME~
As Fate Would Have It.

Strange and unexplained things always seem to burrow their way into the psyche of mankind. Repetitively seeking to bring out and feed off unspoken desires that are in constant conflict from something greater and unseen, a lost, malevolent, ancient deity of destruction.

Even in the depths of one world, he seethes in the confines of the celestial body caging him inward. The Chaos Bringer may lay still but his will still reaches out to ensnare the unwary and wiggle his way into our hearts. Across the reaches of space and time, Light persists and meets the Darkness head on in an attempt to save us. They clash in an endless war of will in a reoccurring nightmare that has echoed across the ages, haunting our very existence, leaving us in their shadow to forever question our own freedom of will. Did it have its limits or is it indeed limitless.
If it is our own to control.

However, Chaos itself cannot be controlled, as was evident in this world of destruction. All that could be seen were two sets of glowing eyes staring intently at each other before turning to acknowledge our very own across the void. One shone with a holy blue which seemed to exude an air of compassion, while the other burned with a sinister purple that harboured an air of contempt. Pinning us down with an accusing gaze like we were parasites, silently questioning why we can run free, while he must remain incarcerated forever.

Yet all that remained of the nightmare was never remembered even as those blazing eyes burned through the flames…

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